very nice game, i liked how accurate you were to the lore while adding your own twists. question, are there only two endings? the council ending and then Nemu's endings?
Thank you! glad you noticed I took a lot of care to not break the lore too much even though I took some liberites here and there.
To answer your question: yes, since it was for the NanoRenO I only had time to make two endings basically. I had (or have) plans to expand it later with another chapter.
I really like that you included voice acting in the game.
I feel the voices you chose, especially for Nemu, are very fitting. Sometimes the intonation is a bit off, but in general the AI generated voices do a great job!
The music was really nice too for each of the different scenes and moods.
I got two endings while playing, not sure if there's more, but I liked the story!
Suggestions for improvement:
- In the story, I didn't understand why Nemu needed to prepare a chalice. She just wakes up and talks to me about it as if I should already know.
- Something similar happened when the Grandpa Gildenbark is presented. The way it's narrated feels like the protagonist knows stuff they shouldn't or something that was taught to them while off-camera. It would be interesting to obtain this lore from a character, teaching it to the protagonist.
- The Kirin all share the same face. It would be nice if you could give each a slightly different face (eye shape, face shape). The hair change and recoloring is a step in the right direction, but could be improved.
- The Kirin branches on the character sprite heads look off, since they're drawn in a different style. Try to match the anime cel-shading and the sprites will look a lot better!
- Some characters are introduced to the reader by name, like Perspa, but the dialogue title still says "Kirin" after we already know their name.
Hello!
Thank you for the feedback! I’m so happy you enjoyed the game!
I originally was making this game for the NanoRenO Jam back in March, but I couldn’t complete in time and aimed for April and then things happened and we’re here in Mid-May. I wanted to add a lot more story and details but I just couldn’t get it in time.
I’ll make good use of your feedback and make adjustments and publish an update at a later time.
Once again thank you for taking the time to play and write an amazing review. Have a great day!
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very nice game, i liked how accurate you were to the lore while adding your own twists.
question, are there only two endings? the council ending and then Nemu's endings?
Thank you! glad you noticed I took a lot of care to not break the lore too much even though I took some liberites here and there. To answer your question: yes, since it was for the NanoRenO I only had time to make two endings basically. I had (or have) plans to expand it later with another chapter.
Well-written and adorable, yet with a hint of horror, I really liked this
Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!
love the game thank you :):):)
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Wow, this is a really nice hololive VN!
I really like that you included voice acting in the game.
I feel the voices you chose, especially for Nemu, are very fitting. Sometimes the intonation is a bit off, but in general the AI generated voices do a great job!
The music was really nice too for each of the different scenes and moods.
I got two endings while playing, not sure if there's more, but I liked the story!
Suggestions for improvement:
- In the story, I didn't understand why Nemu needed to prepare a chalice. She just wakes up and talks to me about it as if I should already know.
- Something similar happened when the Grandpa Gildenbark is presented. The way it's narrated feels like the protagonist knows stuff they shouldn't or something that was taught to them while off-camera. It would be interesting to obtain this lore from a character, teaching it to the protagonist.
- The Kirin all share the same face. It would be nice if you could give each a slightly different face (eye shape, face shape). The hair change and recoloring is a step in the right direction, but could be improved.
- The Kirin branches on the character sprite heads look off, since they're drawn in a different style. Try to match the anime cel-shading and the sprites will look a lot better!
- Some characters are introduced to the reader by name, like Perspa, but the dialogue title still says "Kirin" after we already know their name.
Great job on the game!
Hello! Thank you for the feedback! I’m so happy you enjoyed the game! I originally was making this game for the NanoRenO Jam back in March, but I couldn’t complete in time and aimed for April and then things happened and we’re here in Mid-May. I wanted to add a lot more story and details but I just couldn’t get it in time.
I’ll make good use of your feedback and make adjustments and publish an update at a later time.
Once again thank you for taking the time to play and write an amazing review. Have a great day!